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22nd-Sep-2006 11:59 am
rose, painting
Every time you form a wish,
you hope it comes true.
Every time you ask a question,
you expect a response.
Whenever a problem arises,
you search for resolution-
that's strong and right.
Whenever crimes occur,
there must be action-
proper and swift...

Too bad ideals can't be
so different,
so frustrating.
Why are wishes left to waste away?
Why are questions just ignored?
Why aren't problems solved properly?
Why are crimes, accepted?

I wish I knew.
We must find a way
to bring justice
in this world.
1st-Oct-2006 02:26 am (UTC) - Great Message!
Wow! Without any standard structure, and without any set rhyme scheme, you managed to make such a powerful poem! I couldn't have written it better myself.
27th-Oct-2006 01:45 am (UTC)
Sometimes when I write, I have a song stuck in my head. I try to incorporate the tempo of the song, into a poem and inspiration helps too.
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